Monday, 24 May 2010

Misplaced 2, part 4.

   Ruth heard a scream, and turned and ran towards the site where the plane had crashed.  She could hear a tearing, creaking noise but didn't have time to imagine what it might be.  She pushed her way through the trees and came in sight of the crashed plane just in time to see the tree fall.  It crushed in the side of the plane as though the metal were a cardboard box.  Several people were shouting, but Ruth could hear that someone was screaming, screaming from inside the remains of the plane.  


   She ran towards the wreckage.  Others were already there, pulling away the twisted metal.  She saw Tom emerge, limping and with dark red stains on his clothing.  But that was not the worst.  She could see something else amid the tangled wreckage.  They set to work quickly to move the weight of the tree trunk off the wreckage, but what Ruth had seen was no longer moving...  


   She sat up, startled.  "Sorry," whispered Jack, picking up the stick he had dropped on her as she slept and putting it on the fire.  She lay down again.  Another dream that had seemed to be real, but had not.  The events of the real accident had not been quite the same as what had happened in her dream.  No one had been hurt in reality, just shocked, although it had been a near miss.  The wreck of the plane hadn't looked quite the same, the tree had fallen differently, some people had been missing in the dream.  Yet- it had been close enough to life, there had been something about it that had made it seem so real...


   She snuggled down under her cloak and tried to go back to sleep.  But it was difficult.  She kept thinking about the two dreams.  Although she knew they were just dreams, they bothered her.  It was some time before she could sleep again.


   At home, none of them would have been early risers but here the sun woke them earlier than expected. Ruth noticed that Patrick had already disappeared by the time she awoke.  She wondered where he had got to this time, and tried not to feel annoyed that he had abandoned again them in favour of his own company again.  She had no right to feel annoyed, she knew, but somehow...she did.

   The others all scattered across the island once more, wanting to get as much as possible done before the hottest part of the day.  Ruth and Rachel went back to the rock pools for more crabs.  Last night's batch had been surprisingly tasty.  Ruth wondered while they were there if there was some way of catching fish.  Surely it must be possible, if they could create hooks from bent metal and find something to use as string?  Or something to use as a big net?  Not that fishing was something she knew much about.  Probably they'd soon learn, though.  They'd have too.  


    As she was standing staring out to see she saw something unusual.  A plastic bottle was floating past not far from the shore.  Where had that come from?  Had it fallen overboard from a ship?  If so, how far away was the ship, and had it passed the island close enough to spot their signal fire?  It was being washed towards the beach.  She waded out into the sea and caught the bottle.  The lid was screwed on tightly and there appeared to be a piece of paper inside.  

   Ruth made her way back to the beach, opened the bottle, and after some wiggling around with a stick, extracted the paper.  There was a message on it.


   "Please help, we're trapped on a desert island after our plane crashed.  Come and rescue us!" It was signed by Amy and Sophie.  Ruth smiled and put the paper back in the bottle.  She tightened the lid and clambered out over the rocks that ran down to the sea there and cut off the beach.  She threw the bottle back into the water, as far out from the shore as possible.  It was unlikely it would do any good, but where was the harm?  Anything that kept spirits up and hope alive was good.  


   Soon it was hot, hotter than it had been since they landed.  One by one everyone trickled back to camp and sat or lay in the shade of the rocks and trees, with no energy to move.  Ruth began to wonder if this was the island's normal temperature.  That wouldn't be pleasant.  Fortunately, they had all brought suncream with them.  Everyone was already deeply tanned.


   It was late in the afternoon before they began to feel any cooler.  Some of the girls went down to the beach for a swim.  Ruth was used to the freezing cold water of the North Sea, and compared to that this was warm, but it was pleasantly cool after the heat of the land.  And yet when they left the water and sat on the beach to dry, she felt something was wrong.  The air felt- different.  She wasn't sure why or what it meant.  She just sensed something different.


   She felt that it was affecting the others too.  That evening tempers seemed a little fraught, words and tones of voice seemed harsher than the previous night.  Perhaps it was just the nagging thought that yet another day had gone past without sight or sound of any rescue attempt.  And in the background they could still hear the menacing animal noises.


   Patrick had been away all day again, but this time when he returned he had at least brought with him a lot of fruit and berries that he had collected on his travels- and some advice.  

   "Don't eat those ones," he said, bringing some shiny bright red berries out of his pocket.  Ruth looked at him, and didn't ask how he knew.  She could guess.


   The only good news was that the techies had at last finished the new shelter.  Tonight everyone could sleep inside, and since they would be less crowded hopefully it would be cooler.  Ruth looked up at the sky, which was thick with hot, oppressive clouds.  Just in time, she thought.  It felt like a storm was brewing.

The story continues...

2 comments:

  1. I like very much that you've made Misplaced so different to Hilarity Ensues. It'd be really easy to just throw something together with ideas that didn't make the final cut of the original, but thankfully instead you've given us a lovely new story :) I do think you've got a real talent for story-telling. :)

    I'm really intrigued by Ruth's dreams and what they might mean. I'm wondering if it's some kind of Life on Mars type thing :)

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  2. Why thank you- although most of the credit for ideas and plot goes to the housemates- the whole story comes from one mad, mad conversation!

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